Review:
I really like Tessa Dare’s books. Her stories are always different and refreshing – this book wasn’t an exception.
Madeline Eloise Gracechurch (Maddie for friends and family) is a very shy girl. We, the readers, recognize her shyness as a medical problem: Maddie is an agoraphobic, which her family doesn’t understand. She can’t stand being surrounded by crowds (more than two or three people is something that will already bother her). So you can imagine why a season in London would not be a good thing for her: balls and social gatherings would probably be the worst thing that could happen to her.
Maddie decides to create Captain MacKenzie, a Scottish whom she would have met in a beach in Brighton and that would have gone to war to fight for England. A strong and sudden love has come over Maddie and her Captain and so they became engaged. This is how Maddie manages to be single for five years and, most importantly, she avoids all major social gatherings. After all this time, her conscience starts to kick in and she decides that she should stop fooling her family – after all, they only wanted her to be happy.
This being said, Maddie chooses to kill her imaginary love interest. A death worthy of a hero, which in his last moments thought only of his beloved that would be left all alone in England. Maddie even grieves for her (made-up) Captain and her family allows her to be single for as long as she wishes because she convinces them that her heart has been completely broken. This web of lies has been so well orchestrated that an uncle that lived in Scotland chooses Maddie to be his heir so that she can have his castle and be in the lands of her loved one. It was the best thing that could have happened to Maddie, and so she moves in, with a close aunt to accompany her.
The problem, for me, lies only on one thing: who told Maddie to actually write everything in her letters? Yes, because she sent them somewhere and in them she told her captain everything that was going on in her life. She also sent letters to herself, to show them as answers from him. I really liked the way she wrote the letters, and even though we don’t have them (fully) in the book, I could perfectly imagine the drawings she would do in the edges of them:
My dear imaginary Captain MacKenzie, you are not real and never will be.
I, however, am a true and eternal fool. Here, have a drawing of a snail.
Snail, yes, because Maddie’s great talent is her ability to do scientific drawings of animals (and one of the funniest and cutest parts of the book includes lobsters!).
Everything changes when, one day, Maddie is observing such lobsters and “a man, a very tall man” knocks on her door, and…it’s Captain MacKenzie…he’s real! Well, he’s not exactly as Maddie pictured but he IS real…and he has been receiving her letters – every single one of them, including the ones that spoke about her recently inherited castle.
And here is where everything becomes more complicated. Recently arrived from the war with five soldiers still thinking of him as his leader, Captain MacKenzie will do anything to give his men a home and the lands they deserve - including marring the English girl who wrote him letters of all sorts and that, for his resentment, had decided to kill him!
Maddie doesn’t want, at all, to lose her independency and marry someone who she doesn’t even know. It’s sweet to see how well the Captain remembers the tiny details that she told him about in her letters, from problems with lotions that her aunt had given her, to secrets no one else knew. It’s difficult not to want to know more about someone who already knows so much about us.
Their relationship as friends and a possible couple develops and I particularly liked the relationship between Maddie and the soldiers. It showed a whole other side of her that we could not have seen in any other way. We also start to understand the Captain’s way of being and why he reached the tipping point of considering marrying a stranger. His intentions, not considering the blackmail, are very easy to understand, and are almost selfless.
I don’t want to ruin the book to anyone, so I’ll only add that it is a very light reading, that made me laugh several times and that, as the other books in this series, brings us an unlikely story that holds our attention from start to finish, with delicious details. Sometimes it may have one or other solution that is a bit rushed but it’s something we can close our eyes to. I’ll just add that I thought to give only 4* to this book but, if a book makes laugh this much as this one did, and gives such good moments as it did, it certainly deserves the final score. Oh, and the lobsters finally did what Maddie had wanted them to do from the star of the book hurray!